Events Assignment

aidnii · September 12, 2021, 9:34pm

pragma solidity 0.7.5;

contract Bank {
    
    //storage - persistant data storage
    //memory - temporary data storage
    //calldata - advanced for gas and memory; similar to memory but READ-ONLY 
    
    //state variables
    
    
    mapping(address => uint) balance;
    
    address owner;
    
    event balanceAdded(uint indexed amount, address indexed depositedTo);
    event transferAmount(address from, address to, uint amount);
    
    modifier onlyOwner {
        require(msg.sender == owner);
        _; //run the function
    }
    
    constructor(){
        owner = msg.sender;
    }
    
    function addBalance(uint _toAdd) public onlyOwner returns (uint) {
        balance[msg.sender] += _toAdd;
        emit balanceAdded(_toAdd, msg.sender);
        return balance[msg.sender];
    }

    function getBalance() public view returns (uint) {
        return balance[msg.sender];
        
    }
    
    function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
        require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient");
        require(msg.sender != recipient, "Don't transfer money to yourself");
        
        uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
        
        _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);
        
        assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);
        
        emit transferAmount(recipient, msg.sender, amount);
    }
    
    function _transfer(address from, address to, uint amount) private {
        balance[from] -= amount;
        balance[to] += amount;
    }

}

a.l.a.i.n · September 13, 2021, 9:04am

Yes thanks man this worked

alejandravisa · September 18, 2021, 9:55am

pragma solidity 0.7.5;

contract bank {
    mapping(address => uint) balance;
   
    address owner;
    
    event balanceAdded(uint amount, address indexed depositedTo);
    event balanceTransfered(address indexed depositedTo, address indexed recipientTo, uint amount);
    
    modifier onlyOwner {
        require(msg.sender == owner);
        _;  // run the function
    }
    
    constructor(){
        owner = msg.sender;
    }
  
    function addBalance(uint _toAdd) public returns(uint) {
        balance[msg.sender] += _toAdd;
        emit balanceAdded(_toAdd, msg.sender);
        return balance[msg.sender];
    }
    
    function getBalance() public view returns(uint) {
        return balance[msg.sender];
    }
    
    function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
        //check balance of msg sender.
        require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient");
        require(msg.sender != recipient);
        
        uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
        _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);
        
        emit balanceTransfered (msg.sender, recipient, amount);
        
        assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);
    
        // event logs and other checks
    }
    
    function _transfer(address from, address to, uint amount) private {
        balance[from] -= amount; 
        balance[to] += amount;
    } 
    
}

gaio · September 26, 2021, 6:02am

Here is my solution:

By the way, I was not able to find a copy of the code file for HelloWorld.sol, so I just wrote out this function (from the video):

event transferMade(address indexed recipient, uint indexed amount, address indexed sender);

    function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
         require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount "Balance not sufficient");
         require(msg.sender != recipient, "Don't transfer money to yourself");

         uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];

         _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);

         assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);

         emit transferMade(recipient, amount, msg.sender);
    }

^ this emits an indexed event for the recipient and sender addresses of the transfer, and the amount.

moragarcia75 · October 1, 2021, 3:28pm

pragma solidity 0.8.9;

contract Bank{
mapping (address=>uint)balance;
address owner;

event balanceAdded (uint amount, address depositedTo);
event balanceTransferred (uint amount, address sender,address recipient);

modifier onlyOwner{
    require (msg.sender==owner);
    _;
}

constructor(){
    owner=msg.sender;
}
function addBalance (uint _toAdd)public onlyOwner returns (uint){
    balance[msg.sender]+=_toAdd;
    emit balanceAdded(_toAdd,msg.sender);
    return balance[msg.sender];
}

function getBalance()public view returns (uint){
    return balance[msg.sender];
}

function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public{
   require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient");
   require(msg.sender != recipient, "Dont transfer money to yourself");
   
   uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
   
    _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);
    
    assert(balance[msg.sender]== previousSenderBalance - amount);
}

function _transfer(address from, address to, uint amount) private {

    balance[from] -= amount;
    balance[to] += amount;
    emit balanceTransferred (amount, from, to);
}

}

jon_m · October 2, 2021, 9:12pm

Hi @moragarcia75,

Your transfer event and corresponding emit statement are both well coded, and the emit statement will log appropriate data when the transfer() function is successfully executed.

A couple of comments…

It’s better to emit the event at the very end of the function which completes the transaction i.e. transfer() not _transfer().
_transfer() is what we call a helper function .
Another important factor here is that if you emit an event in a helper function, you are restricting your ability to reuse that helper function. It will be more reuseable if we can call it from another function when we may not want to emit the same event — either a different one, or no event at all. That way we can reuse the helper function whenever we just want its functionality (i.e. the operations, or computation, that it performs).
In general an emit statement is probably better placed after an assert statement.

Let me know if anything is unclear, or if you have any questions

alp257 · October 9, 2021, 4:03pm

…

event amountTransfered(address indexed sender, address indexed recipient, uint amount);

…

function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
    require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance is not sufficient");
    require(msg.sender != recipient, "You cannot transfer to yourself");

    uint previousBalance = balance[msg.sender];

    _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);

    emit amountTransfered(msg.sender, recipient, amount);

    assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousBalance - amount);
}

…

Shadowstep2003 · October 9, 2021, 10:45pm

pragma solidity 0.7.5;

contract Bank {
    
 mapping (address => uint) balance; 
 address owner; 
 
 event balanceAdded(uint amount, address depositedTo);
 event transferSent(uint amount, address sentFrom, address sentTo);

 // When placed in a function this will run first
 modifier onlyOwner {
     require(msg.sender == owner);
     _; // run the function that called this
 }
 
 constructor(){
     owner = msg.sender;
 }
 
 function addBalance(uint _toAdd) public onlyOwner returns (uint) {
     balance[msg.sender] += _toAdd;
     emit balanceAdded(_toAdd, msg.sender);
     return balance[msg.sender];
 }
 
 function getBalance() public view returns (uint) {
     return balance[msg.sender];
     
 }
 
 function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
     require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient");
     require(msg.sender != recipient, "Don't transfer money to yourself");
     
     uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
     
     _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);
     
     emit transferSent(amount, msg.sender, recipient);
     
     assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);
     
 }
 
 function _transfer(address from, address to, uint amount) private {
     balance[from] -= amount;
     balance[to] += amount;
 }
 
 
}

Two events were added, one for adding the balance and one for the transfer

jon_m · October 11, 2021, 5:59am

Hi @alp257,

Your transfer event and corresponding emit statement are both well coded, and the emit statement will log appropriate data when the transfer() function is successfully executed.

Just one observation…
In general an emit statement is probably better placed after an assert statement.

Just let me know if you have any questions

jon_m · October 11, 2021, 6:05am

Hi @Shadowstep2003,

Your transfer event and corresponding emit statement are both well coded, and the emit statement will log appropriate data when the transfer() function is successfully executed.

Just one observation…
In general an emit statement is probably better placed after an assert statement.

Just let me know if you have any questions

CryptoByNight · October 11, 2021, 9:05am

event transfer(uint _amount, address indexed _from, address indexed _to);

jon_m · October 12, 2021, 10:07am

Hi @CryptoByNight,

Your transfer event declaration looks good, but can we also see how you are emitting it in your transfer() function?

CryptoByNight · October 12, 2021, 12:59pm

function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
        require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient");
        require(msg.sender != recipient, "Don't transfer money to yourself");
        
        uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
        
        _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);
                
        assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);
        
        emit transfer(amount, msg.sender, recipient)
    }

jon_m · October 12, 2021, 1:44pm

Hi @CryptoByNight,

Your transfer event and corresponding emit statement are both correct and well coded. The emit statement is in the correct position in the transfer() function body and will log appropriate data when the transfer() function is successfully executed

Crownie · October 23, 2021, 1:02am

pragma solidity 0.7.5;

contract Bank {
    
    mapping(address => uint) balance;
    address owner;
    
    event balanceAdded(uint amount, address indexed depositedTo);
    event transferLog(uint amount, address toAddress, address fromAddress);
    
    modifier onlyOwner {
        require(msg.sender == owner);
        _;
    }
    
    constructor() {
        owner = msg.sender;
    }
    
    function addBalance(uint _toAdd) public onlyOwner returns(uint) {
        balance[msg.sender] += _toAdd;
        emit balanceAdded(_toAdd, msg.sender);
        return balance[msg.sender];
    }
    
    function getBalance() public view returns(uint) {
        return balance[msg.sender];
    }
    
    function transfer(address recipient, uint amount) public {
        require(balance[msg.sender] >= amount, "Balance not sufficient.");
        require(msg.sender != recipient, "Do not transfer money to yourself.");
        
        uint previousSenderBalance = balance[msg.sender];
        
        _transfer(msg.sender, recipient, amount);

        assert(balance[msg.sender] == previousSenderBalance - amount);

        // My answer:
        emit transferLog(amount, recipient, msg.sender);
    }
    
    function _transfer(address from, address to, uint amount) private {
        balance[from] -= amount;
        balance[to] += amount;
    }
}

jon_m · October 22, 2021, 4:59pm

Hi @Crownie,

Your transfer event and corresponding emit statement are both well coded, and the emit statement will log appropriate data when the transfer() function is successfully executed.

Just one observation…
In general an emit statement is probably better placed after an assert statement.

Just let me know if you have any questions

Crownie · October 23, 2021, 1:01am

Thank you for that tip!

PaulS96 · October 26, 2021, 4:06pm

    mapping(uint => User) users;

    struct User{
        uint id;
        uint balance;
    }
    event balanceUpdate(uint amount, address depositedTo);

    function addUser(uint id, uint balance) public {
        users[id] = User(id, balance);
        emit balanceUpdate(balance, id);
    }

    function updateBalance(uint id, uint balance) public {
         User storage user = users[id];
         user.balance = balance;
    }

    function getBalance(uint id) view public returns (uint) {
        return users[id].balance;
    }

}

I always get an error message at emit. Maybe some of you can tell me what I did wrong. Thanks in advance.

jon_m · October 27, 2021, 4:02pm

Hi @PaulS96

You get a compiler error because the second parameter in your event declaration is an address data type …

… but the corresponding argument in the emit statement has a uint data type …

An emit statement has to emit values with the same data types as those defined in the corresponding event declaration.

The reason why the event declaration given to you in the video has a uint amount parameter and an address depositedTo parameter is because it is meant to be used in the addBalance function in our Bank contract, and not in the MemoryAndStorage contract. It also has the name balanceAdded (instead of balanceUpdate). Try implementing it there instead, and then posting your solution again.

You can also continue with your implementation of the event in MemoryAndStorage. Giving it the name balanceUpdate would suggest that emitting it with data from the updateBalance function would be a more logical choice. You will need to change the names of the parameters in the event declaration, so that they better describe the data that is actually logged, and you will also need to change the data type of the second parameter.

Let me know if anything is still unclear, or if you have any questions about how to correct this.

PaulS96 · October 28, 2021, 10:29am

@jon_m
Thank you for your feedback. What is your opinion on the altered solution below? I changed the address parameter to uint. Is this something you can do or do you advise against such practices? Thanks in advance for your answer

pragma solidity 0.7.5;
contract MemoryAndStorage {

    mapping(uint => User) users;

    struct User{
        uint id;
        uint balance;
    }
    event balanceUpdate(uint amount, uint depositedTo);

    function addUser(uint id, uint balance) public {
        users[id] = User(id, balance);
    }

    function updateBalance(uint id, uint balance) public {
         User storage user = users[id];
         user.balance = balance;
         emit balanceUpdate(balance, id);
    }

    function getBalance(uint id) view public returns (uint) {
        return users[id].balance;
    }

}